i am finished with a rough draft of a t-shirt i have been planning on design for some time. well, ever since that hand design i did a while back. i want to hear some good critiques about this design. you don't need to be in anyway an artistically experienced design. a bunch of fine art da vincis arn't going to buy my shirt. i need a common view, your first impression. help me out here. i would give me own personal critiques but i don't want you leaving comments like, "yeah, cool, but you are right. its too..." this comment = lame. i'll put a nice and big pic of the design right under here. thank you.
God bless.
4 comments:
first off, i love the concept! really good. i think the white tee looks best. white doesn't distract from the design. and light blue on white just looks great. the pink actually looks pretty good too. i'm not big on pink shirts, but i like that one. the light blue is next in goodness. then the dark blue..... then the purple... sorry man. citicisms: the palms of the hands looks a little funny. they look a little flat to me, i think they need to look more cupped, if that makes sense. hummmmm.... that's it actually. that's the only criticism i have. again, i love the design. i like how the way the blue tendrils curl around the fingers. awesome.
Hm. Well, I am commenting!!! So you should be happy with me. It's a really cool design, but I don't exactly like. I guess it's kind of a personal taste thing, because I look at it and go, hm, I don't really like that. But at the same time, it is really cool. I disagree with Diggy, though, I liked the purple one best. But he probably knows more about such things than I do, and as we all know I like dark colors. So, whatever.
Pretty sweet sig. Jader and I thought maybe sum stuff in the middle, or maybe not have the hands at the bottom, near the waist, but otherwise, i dont know where the hands could/should go...
the colors for the shirts were all cool, sarah and diggy are WRONG! :P
Umm, yeah, maybe just add sum stuff int he middle, i liked the simple text, Te Louvarei (i think it says that, i forgot already)
Next idea--- no text, like One Truth style, getting a point across like that is the next level up.
It's a cool design but I'm not sure if it really belongs on a t-shirt.
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