ok, so i re-did everything. redoing things feeds a certain pet peeve, so it was a pain in butt. nonetheless, it's back to the first new draft stage. in my last post i talked about making it more cuiabano, well, i didn't. my idea was to add
sao jeronimo and
santo antonio in the skyline (if you have no idea what those are, you probably aren't from cuiaba.) this would probably include a long line that would go all the way around the shirt. tell me what you think. another idea that i had would have a black and white shirt. not black with white or visa-versa. let me demonstrate.

though this would probably call for two differant color cloths sown together. i don't know if they do this.
well, i re-did the front of the shirt. it should look oddly like the one a couple of post ago...

...i even took a step further and did the back.

now the "2007 - 2008" looks kinda awkward where it is. well, i think so. any ideas? maybe on the sleeves? that would be cool. feedback!
God bless.